OUR POEM 2

thank you parola ....... i think my new lines aren't great
i've done it in a hurry

and what is it about that thing you done and nobody knew about it

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Parola d'onore [عزيزي الزائر يتوجب عليك التسجيل لمشاهدة الرابطللتسجيل اضغط هنا]

Northern star far above
Cast your light on this love

till the dawn we will wait
eyes to eyes tight'en fixed

will this passion last and stand
will 'r thrills go hand in hand

Northernstar be my guide
As I sail through this tide

Let the truth shine on bright
Exorcise demons' spite

I will drift with hope 'n glee
wondering where my home would be

I will reach the no-cheat lands
Lofty spirit , weary hands

pray you angel guide my soul
like an eagle hounding owl

demon fang bloody land
screaming loud baby banned

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Well
lines were devided according to foots as follows
One foot = two syllables

3
3
3,5 <<< I know this is crazy abut let's continue

then

3
3
3,5

but I added another 3,5 foot though I should have poetized two 3 foot verses

However, now you have continued with another 3,5 verse followed by a 3 foot verse I think everything will be fine

You know why??0

I think this is sooo great because we made a shift of verses according to the the content

ممكن يكون انعكاس ترتيب عدد السيلابلز بسبب الحديث عن الشياطين اللي يعكسون كل شيء


WOW

This is romantic

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P.S. I liked the image you drew

thats great Parola
i liked that you liked my image

lets roll

and where's everybody
we need your beautiful ideas

I am occupied with exams these days
i will be back as soon as i finish my last exam enshallah

Thank you Ahmed

Great Ahmed
I will be back soon

T.C
xD

Thanks for invitation dear bro
No time to urge my poor imagination
I'll be back soon insha' allah

great idea Ahmad. thanks a lot.

Parola, quite talented.

thank you for your invitation
however I KNOW NOTHING IN LITERATURE
i was thinking to write a line also
but i was like..... MADA WAIT.... STOP TYPING....DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT THEY MEANT BY FOOT????
i am sorry

.Thank you Ibtesam

Mada, I think you are fully aware of English syllables. Just poetize two lines with 6 syllables each. We are only having fun here.